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‘’Bawang Merah Bawang Putih’
Once upon time there lived two little girls. Their name are BawangPutih and BawangMerah. Bawang Merah and Bawang Putih had opposite characters and personalities. Bawang Putih was diligent, kind, honest and humble girl. while, Bawang merah was so lazy, glamorous, proud and envious girl. BawangPutih lived with her stepmother and her stepsister Bawang Merah.
Her stepmother and Bawang Merah treated Bawang Putih badly. Once morning Bawang Putih was washing some clothes in a river. Accidentaly her stepmother clothes were was away by a river and a found an old women who gave her a small and big pumpkin.
BawangPutih told about the clothes, the old woman and the pumpkins. When she opened, they found jewelry. BawangMerah choose the big pumpkins. Unfortunately it was full of snake.
The Widow and Bawang Merah her daughter finally realized what they did all this time was wrong and asked Bawang Putih to forgive them.